MemberJune 17, 2021 at 9:33 pm
Your sell sheet looks good!
The theme is clear and easily understandable. The simplified play is also clear and both describes the emotions felt in play really well.
The only downside is that everyone knows that a beehive has hexagonal shapes instead of a pentagon. While it is clear when you learn the games rules why it helps to break ties. It still is hard to ignore. Other ways to solve the tie breaking problem may be whoever places their 3rd bee first, or increase the player count.