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  • Edward Wedig

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    May 31, 2021 at 7:23 pm
    Premium Member

    Good job so far. I think your sell sheet is too simple. You need to include things like target audience/age range, length of gameplay, and number of players. Publishers also need a component list to be sure the “fun” supports the number of components.

    The video is fine, but I think you could tighten it up and get it down to 90-120 seconds. There are a number of pauses in there that could be removed.